tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1656035854180770700.post1686363974958080377..comments2023-12-31T09:16:20.426-06:00Comments on ADVENTURES IN FICTION: Serial SurprisesKeanan Brandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12638962927055276969noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1656035854180770700.post-63232387174858138362009-02-10T01:47:00.000-06:002009-02-10T01:47:00.000-06:00Phy - I re-read Episode 5, and was embarrassed at ...Phy - I re-read Episode 5, and was embarrassed at how choppy and disjointed it was. Ay-yi-yi.<BR/><BR/>However, I think Episode 6--about 2,000 words shorter--is a much better piece of storytelling, and I hope Episode 7 gets even better, and that some of the connections mentioned in the blog post get a mention in this portion of the story.<BR/><BR/>Jade - Ironically, we're working on a puzzle at the Club, and I keep having to tell the kids that "Of course the pieces don't fit; you're trying to put the garage roof in the driveway." Maybe, just maybe, they'll actually listen to me tomorrow.Keanan Brandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12638962927055276969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1656035854180770700.post-50996114671467207572009-02-09T23:21:00.000-06:002009-02-09T23:21:00.000-06:00well, ok, not exactly the same. more about how thi...well, ok, not exactly the same. more about how things can happen you don't expect.:0Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1656035854180770700.post-13438630587876788312009-02-09T23:19:00.000-06:002009-02-09T23:19:00.000-06:00It's funny, I just wrote practically the same thin...It's funny, I just wrote practically the same thing(finally blogged again). Sometimes, things pull together like a jigsaw when you suddenly realize the piece you were holding was upside down!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1656035854180770700.post-17528178856591170932009-02-09T09:46:00.000-06:002009-02-09T09:46:00.000-06:00I love it when ideas that have been 'in the air' f...I love it when ideas that have been 'in the air' finally take on substance and provide direction to the work that you might not have planned on in the beginning.Phyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17308107138465049785noreply@blogger.com